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water under our bridge

we've come so close to goodbyes
more then once almost giving up

both of us we could have walked
stopped trying and said its to hard

 

our loves still there behind the hurt
lets meet half way and compromise

 

 

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  • Broken-Bones
    August 17, 2008

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    I loved your take on the propmt, I know many of us know this feeling of trying to work through things and I always think it says a lot about the strength of the relationship. You use your words wonderfully, great work


  • Darkwell
    August 17, 2008

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    This is so sweet and sometimes love is all you need to make the rest work out. I love your heart in this and wonderfully penned too


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    August 17, 2008

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    I really like your thoughts on this, using the bridge as the inbetween meeting place. Nicely penned. Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene