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underneth

underneth the dusty colored bricks
I sit relaxed,calm
every paged turned, I become more transfixed
to a place i go seldom

painting an image on my mind
remembering every detail
underneth the dusty colored bricks

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    August 17, 2008

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    You made this place your own personal sanctuary.
    Very nicely penned. Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene