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dead and damned

real live crucified,
steel through flesh;
mix it up with the young witch,
a fire set in her flesh
to purge the world of sin

old men tell us sex is wrong
cut bliss, it's evil
given no reason for self-denial,
legions of the blind and the passive
follow blindly

if someone suggests jesus fucked mary magdalene
they are heretic and blasphemous
free thought is forbidden
and in a tornado of taboo

we're all damned

Author notes

this is not very well written... but it's five in the morning and my brain isn't fully functional

but i love marilyn manson and wanted to enter this contest

this is inspired by 'rock is dead'

...i like to fuck to this song

A contest entry

rip it

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  • Lady Voldemort silver member
    September 3, 2008
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    That is AWESOME.

  • ea silver member
    August 21, 2008
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    yes.


  • disgrace
    August 17, 2008
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    haha i love dat song too.. he is like a role model to me... WOO HOO I LIKE IT ... I LIKE ALL OF DEM.. wat a world

  • disgrace
    August 17, 2008

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    haha i love dat song too.. he is like a role model to me... WOO HOO I LIKE IT ... I LIKE ALL OF DEM.. wat a world