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bridge over trouble warter

i lay head down and think of all
of my pain that i go through every-night and
day. pain is hard to tell and hard to meet
some-times i wish that was a bridge that i can
put over my pain and walk all over it.

a bridge that put on top of my problems
so i can over come it. not remember-in what
happens to me in the past and know.

cover it with flowers and trees to over shadow
the pain that want through and pain that hunted
me for years.

a bridge over trouble waters
is maid for the pain and troubles
that i go through ever-day

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  • trekkergirl
    March 3

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    ahhh wonder what the picture looks like. This is well written. Thanks for sharing this with us. Good write as usual

  • celadia
    August 17, 2008
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    It goes with the picture so well.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    August 17, 2008

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    A very throughtful take on the picture. I am sure we have all thought this at times.
    Thank you so much for your entry
    Gaylene