Drain me
Tell Me
Of differences
Your heart desires
Love hurts
Please
Drain me
Trust Me
With messages Of Love
To Your Heart
Embrace your Memory
Please
Drain me
Love Me
With all of your heart
I hear your voice
I feel your Presence
Please
Be honest
And
Let me go
I'm drained
Author notes
I ellaborated on your poem...hope you like it!!! =)
A contest entry
- What drains you? by peter1.
450 points, ended August 19, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Good going on the gold and a great emulation of the host's piece!
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WOW!!!!!
WOW!!! So far, you were the ONLY one to use MY POEM as your inspiration even though I said to do it!!! This is an INCREDIBLE write, and I am pretty much speechless because you got your inspiration from me!!! This is EXACTLY what I was looking for in this contest, and you really nailed it! Wow, again!
Dr. P
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