We met in high school
We soon fell in love
I thought that she was
Sent from above.
We became inseperable
But come junior year
One night heavy rain
Brought my worst fear.
She was driving too fast
Did not see the ledge
Lost control of her car
And swirved off the edge.
I can't take the pain
I still need her here
Gonna jump from the bridge
Then I see her appear.
She pushed me back up
Said it's not my time to go
I'll always be with you
In your heart and your soul.
Author notes
Ok what I got from the picture is two high school sweethearts
She died and his love for her made him want to be with her
He tried to kill himself hoping they'd be together again
Her spirit came and saved him because killing himself would only send him to hell
and she helped him by telling him she'd always be with him.
It was from his point of veiw
P.S. I too love the picture
A contest entry
- Speak Those Words.....Picture Prompt.....(PW allowed) by crazyash007.
600 points, ended August 29, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful
Very creative and well done. A terrific expression for the image. Best of luck in the contest.
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amazing
simple yet powerful.......
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too simple yet too beautifull......the prompt was taken and written well upon......
the flow was too smooth and i like that......
all the best
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