Understand The Love Code
By: D Saul So Sexy
As days get heisted
And I lay here thinking
Trying to understand why me?
I was comfortable with listening
To lonely sheets and enjoying
The music of only the way I breath.
Then here she comes as I awake out my
Boxers peepin my sexiness like some
Ground hog sex fiend.
She beat my heart so bad
and watched me bleed.
I thought she was meant for me
I thought I was everything she needed.
How could you deny me?
So now you don’t know me but
You new when I just had my steel in you.
And when everyone saw your worst
I really seen nothing but the best in you.
When everyone including the hatters
Wanted to shake you I was like frankly my dear
Fuck them because I will hav’em stankin
For you.
You must understand the love code
That its races and bitches and niggaz
Can be so cold. I rather die in freezing cold
Before I give myself all myself for you
To fuck over me.
See understanding the love code you
Must have been where I’ve been.
I went to work came home and gave
You all of me and bitch I am not your slut
Whore you got to be lame I am a G.
Your fears was my tears and when
I purchased you material it surely wasn’t
From no fucken Sears. Appreciate that
I am a young man I a m the hustle grand
To the engagement 4 carat band I put
Around your finger. Then you want to be
All in my ear moaning that I can’t live with out you
D like a whack as opera singer.
I loved you and I could have stroked
Zillions of yamps but I remember
Your angelic face kissing the sweat off of you after
Bedroom work. Bitch you cheated on me
And hear I am going all berserk.
© Darius C., All rights reserved
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Do you write rap lyrics? If not, you should! This is raw and real. Love is a bitch and can ruin so many. Keep keeping on! I am sure the right woman will come along. Be patient, it truly takes time to find that soul-mate. Great work poet! Love where you went with this piece.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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danm I luv the passionate flow. It was really sexy. I love the ending. It was so personal. The metaphors was aiight. It sound real good cause it rhyme. You went really hard and the rhyme was hard too. You got me emotionally hot ova here. That part about you hearing the music of breathe was really sexy and stroking her angelic face was even more sexier. Some people on allpoetry be rappin like but you seem to be more passionate more desciriptive imaginable and metaphorical. YOu place everything on it.
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excellent
wow very deep, but I really liked it a lot. Sorry you got hurt by somebody you really loved.
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Hey, I really like this. It's a shame that people would hurt the ones they love for a cheap thrill. Very good write!
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thanks ga you would be suprised what folks do when they let another instrument of their body think for them
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WOW MY LOVE THIS WAS GOOD I JUST HOPE UR NOT RUIN FOR OTHER WOMEN GREAT JOB MY LOVE
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u mean u hope that ungreatful bitch hasnt runied it for another women well it damn near seems like she have its been two years and i am finally lettin one chick get to me and its not even easy for her
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IT CARE BEING CAREFUL AND NOTHING WRONG WITH IT JUST DON'T BLAME HER FOR SOMETHING ANOTHER CHICK DID
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ok baby i will try my hardest not to
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Alot of poeple have been there. Great work keep it up!
To the engagement 4 carat band I put
Around your finger. Then you want to be
All in my ear moaning that I can’t live with out you
D like a whack as opera singer.
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thank u
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dam thats deep and so true i totally undastand boo
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thanks baby
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i like this mr finest yes the love code no outside invaders understand are deny the fact of pain and hurt and go in to denial la la land when dealing with such a issue. i can just bet my two johhny taylor dollars that is this takes place in ones life they would be so ashamed of them selves for leaving such briallants guilt always return to your front door no long how time passes i really like this
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