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A Forgotten Remedy

I lately think
the day I die
will come so soon
it'll pass me by

I hope I will
continue on
somehow in memory
I'll be so strong

let me answer
your every prayer
and let me see through
your every stare

I come from nothing
that seems so great
I long for something
that seems to late

anger and excitement
fill my mind
but this beauty and passion
it leaves me blind

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  • Cat10
    August 17, 2008

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    once again, you don't fail to amaze me, great job 'n keep it up