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What God Moves the Hands of Time?

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As I look back upon all my proud people,

The yellow moon of my Cherokee ancestors' harvest

Hangs in death throes from its Native American sky;

And the blackened moon above the grand, Irish flag

Bleeds of my forefathers' histories throughout time.

While their descendents, each in turn

Brought forth years of brutal suffering

To the light of the consciousness stream,

Fighting blinding tears in eyes that finally saw their dream.

Yet, their nations built strong people and rich legacies,

Through many moons under tragic skies;

And centuries fraught with death of spirit, asking:

What God moves the cruel hands of time

That rule with injustice, hate, and pain?

 

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(Option 5) Contest Image: "The Creation of Adam" by Michelangelo Buonarroti, courtesy of art.com

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  • arafura gold member
    August 17, 2008
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    Wonderful! I wonder who moves those hands too!


  • Topaze
    August 17, 2008
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    A fine piece of poetry, Leonardo and the hands. My best wishes sweet poet always.


  • Solidified
    August 17, 2008

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    thank you for entering and for crediting the image. I love the painting, it's stunning.


    I am so happy you used the term Native American sky, and the Irish- people who have been repressed and who have had to struggle greatly. you brought hope though with the end of this poem.


    Just a very beautiful and thought provoking write.


    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      August 20, 2008
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      Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!

      Thank you so much for the silver trophy, you just made my day!!! Peace, Cyn