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When Is Enough, Enough?

Would it be enough to know that I existed
even in my solitude for you

Through my lens, every now and again
you would appear

Would it be enough to know I dreamed of you
this is where you came to me

By candlelight, every now and again
your voice is in my ear

Would it be enough to know I sing to you
Fifth fret in root of B

Echo's between strings, every now and again
my soul yearns to have you near

It's never enough, when every now and again
I'm reminded you're not here



3/07



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  • myrataal silver member
    September 4, 2008

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    You write universal ...

    but in an unique voice ... Very well expressed!

    Thank you so much for reading my work. I truly appreciate it.

    Love
    Myra


  • MuddyKing
    September 3, 2008

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    5th fret root of b
    major blues scale...not sure of your instrument, but mine is a Fender fat Strat
    I love the repetition in this
    and it sure sounds like the blues

    excellent

    peace Muddy


  • Ms. Black Eyeliner
    August 17, 2008

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    "It's never enough, when every now and again
    I'm reminded your not here"

    this poem broke my heart! i've been there

    great poem i loved it