Drain
Me
Of
Your
Love
Please
Drain
Me
Of
Your
Memory
Please
Drain
Me
Of
Your
Presence
Please
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This gives me a feeling of someone pleading with a stalker.
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The word "drain" is exhausting and is used well here. You seem overwhelmed and I suppose, drained. When you write "please", 3 times, does it become a lament? Good job? Could you take a look at something of mine? I would appreciate it. Thanks
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