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Betray Me Please

The world is crashing down around me
Consumed by a seething rage
The world crashes around me
Beasts freed from their rusted cage

Why walk when you can crawl
Innocence hides all evil
For the sweetest words will fall
From the tainted lips of liars

We learn aim to kill
But others seek their fun
In the pleasure of the hunt
Civilized gentlemen carry a loaded gun

Velvet hands of steel caress
A shattered heart
But he was the one that
Broke it from the start

Show no mercy to thy foe
Or even to a friend
As we soon shall learn
All betray us in the end






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  • x Simply x Me x
    August 17, 2008

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    This is amazing! I absolutely loved this read!!! and ohh how true!. Your choice of words is perfect!