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She fades

And, un-noticed, she
fades. Leaving memory's heart
torn beyond repair.

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Haiku.
Sunday.
Prompt -
http://www.annyoder.com/images/gallery/when_the_music_fades.jpg
OneLastThing--x

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    October 25, 2008
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    awww beautifully wrote, it makes me feel so sad because I feel that's how I am myself. It hurts.


  • innocence jaded.xx
    August 17, 2008

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    Oooh, I really liked this ! It was such a powerful poem. I liked how you wrote it as a Haiku. Very creative =) But could you please put your Allpoetry name in your Author's Notes? Thanks ! Great poem, & keep it up ! ♥