May all society bite their tongues and choke
Their facade makes me sick
Their masquerade is pretty weak
They hide themselves behind a fake smile
They tell lies like an easy game
They play around like children in a play
They are all but sinners and a plague...
May they choke with their tongue
May they dig up their own grave with their own tongue...
Society, all, must pay...
They desire power
and bring forth pain
They are competent gamblers and play around with anyone soul
Nothing but an empty vessel they all are
They have a body but nothing else from that
They are all dead inside
May they choke when they tell lies
May they not breath when time pass
Choke on your lies, bite your tongue and die...
A contest entry
- Choking by harrypotter.
375 points, ended August 22, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Wow i actually did it different i was so inspired but by mistake i deleted it all so i just made it again but change everything although the original was best(thats just my opinion) hope u all like i
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DUDE!!! This is AWESOME!!! I SWEAR I feel like shouting this every day in rush hour traffic..lol..yeah, all kidding aside even though you had to rewrite this, this is absolutely incredible! It made me stop and THINK, ya' know? I LOVE THIS, man!
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thanks
Thank you am glad u like it...me too i sometimes feel like telling all people in their faces how sick they make me but nothing good ill come from it...anyways thanks for the comment
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