So you stole him from me,
That's perfectly fine
And from my perspective
That is divine
While your kissing him
I hope you are stung,
Then again,
I hope you choke on his tongue.
Author notes
lol, its not true, and i find humor in this, my friend thinks it gross on a HUGE level.
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A contest entry
- Choking by harrypotter.
375 points, ended August 22, 2008, 7 entries
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Funny!
This is vry funny! Thanks for entering best of luck! -
OOOOOOOhhhh- acid and vinegar. Love this witty little gem. Your anger rises like smoke from the screen. Brevity is a spice to poetry.


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SWEETNESS!!! I LOVE the analogy you have going here, babe. Totally righteous! I LOVE IT...
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cute! lol....very nice.

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haha lol 'tis funny!...lol love it
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