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Jelousy is Equal to Envy

So you stole him from me,
That's perfectly fine
And from my perspective
That is divine
While your kissing him
I hope you are stung,
Then again,
I hope you choke on his tongue.

Author notes

lol, its not true, and i find humor in this, my friend thinks it gross on a HUGE level. .

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  • Nidaeah
    October 29, 2008
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    Funny!

    This is vry funny! Thanks for entering best of luck!


  • WolfHeart
    October 21, 2008

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    OOOOOOOhhhh- acid and vinegar. Love this witty little gem. Your anger rises like smoke from the screen. Brevity is a spice to poetry.


  • harrypotter
    August 22, 2008
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    SWEETNESS!!! I LOVE the analogy you have going here, babe. Totally righteous! I LOVE IT...


  • Clinging-to-Life
    August 18, 2008
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    cute! lol....very nice.


  • thesefadingstars.
    August 17, 2008
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    haha lol 'tis funny!...lol love it

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