As the last drop of reason evaporates,
I'm forced to dive into disaster.
Discovering that there is no sane explanation,
For why someone would taunt fate with fire.
Such an immortal devastation I'm facing,
Breaking the rules for something so weak.
Eyes of my kind question my motives,
When even I don't understand them.
Here I stand on the ledge of ruin,
Because she can't possibly understand,
The burning demands of this hunger.
And naively she'll cling to my arms for protection.
Desperately trying to evade dropping my porcelain doll.
Because her fragile face could never be glued back together.
My eyes are so unforgiving of the danger I will undoubtedly put her in.
I pray that the angels may save her soul when mercy won't be shown to mine.
Author notes
Inspired by: "I've decided that as long as I was going to hell, I might as well do it thoroughly." -Edward Cullen, Twilight.
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ooh you have a lot of trophies! well-deserved trophies too. it's a beautiful poem. especially the first two lines, they really drew me in. <3.
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amazing! just simply amazing
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amazing! i really like the fragile face line
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Good job! I loved it!
-Draggie
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I absolutley love it good luck in the contest!
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This poem is simply Amazingly Amazing If you did not win gold I would be furious but you did so no complaints I loved the bit about the porcelain doll.....as I said It was amazingly amazing <3
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Thank you for the wonderful comment darling!
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Love it
That's beautiful right there. You capture Edward's emotion. Awesome job. Good Luck -
i loved this poem and how you show the fear that edward has just being close to bella, good write, well done.
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Loved it! I like your explanation of the quote because truly there is so much impact and emotion put into so few words that unless we know his point of view we don't truly get it. Great imagery and word choice. Excellent poem!
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this is really good. great intereptation of the qoute! i really enjoyed reading it.
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befre i even read it in knew you choose the twilight one! i love it!
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