Eyelids floating downward, shutting out the world.
I see new images appear, as imagination is unfurled,
stretching my horizons to forever. I can see
all the things I’ve missed. All the possibilities.
The passion that I’ve longed for, the subtle curve of breast.
The warmth of tender kisses softly trailing down her chest
across her stomach, gently, to find rest in pleasure’s place.
Somewhere in the darkness, I find pleasure in this space.
As I return to wakefulness, I view my locality
and wonder which experiences are reality.
Author notes
Prompt: When my eyes are closed, am I truly seeing anything?
Picture Credit: http://nikol.deviantart.com/art/looking-inward-5008201
No limit
A contest entry
- Questionable Prompts I by B Chandler.
600 points, ended August 17, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome but I Won't Turn Down Fluffy One's Either :D
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Excellent
A very masterful creation. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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I find this quite sweet and sad. Typical 'you' type take on the prompt.
Well done. 
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This is wonderful
love the thought of what happens
when one closes their eyes
and one can see new possibilities
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You're over the ten line mark
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Ooops. Sorry, I didn't catch the limit (and I looked - I guess it just didn't sink in ) I've shortened it... Thanks
Ken
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good luck in the contest my lover
kat
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