One more t/i/m/e/ and everything f
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you're not here; I'm not a blonde.
Too darn s*t*u*p*i*d*, too darn y\o\u\n\g\,
damn boy, you don't know what you're missing.
&& I hate to declare war under lines,
just as much as I hate to write about you in hard times
I s.w.o.r.e. myself once I would never write about guys,
and yet here I am feeding myself with empty lies.
So what if I whine you over,
I needed you so badly;
I feel so sorry that you rejected me
A blonde chick will [never] love you the way I do.
&& hair color baby, don't define [true {♥}love.]
Your mirror image beauty will eventually dissapear,
God I hate to love someone who's not even r/e/a/l/.
[ 1st] time and last, I swear I lock this up!
I'll feed myself with lies to break myself a\p\a\r\t\.
Baby your s*h*i*n*y* eyes-tell me-were they also lies?
Oh honey I'm no toy; at this age you take everything with joy.
At least here I rant knowing you will never read,
even better knowing you will never understand;
your intelligence is in lack-mode babe [*winks*]
&& I'm no barbie girl, going to a party with ken,
baby you ain't even the p.e.r.f.e.c.t. ten,
[my imaginary guy is]
So I'll just smile past by
&& pretend I never knew,
you like a pretty face,
&& not an honest heart....
I'll never regret this,
you were too gentle,
but I'll make sure you'll regret l.o.s.i.n.g. me
'cause honey, my type of loving is b\i\t\t\e\r\s\w\e\e\t\ and unique...
&& when you need such ♥, I know you'll come back to me;
Babe you were the chocolate to my c*h*e*r*r*y*,
the cheese to my f/r/i/e/s/,
everything would've gone fine
if "beauty" wasn't in-between...
so what if I'm not a skinny b/i/t/c/h
Heart still beats the same song,
lips still dance with tongue,
waiting for you to turn back && run
to kiss me && say baby I was so wrong...
"I never should've let you go,
I should've stayed here all n/i/g/h/t/ long;
baby I'm sorry I never meant those hurtful words;
I'm an idiot && a jerk, I used you for fun && I regret letting you go."
I'll await for those words to a.p.p.e.a.r
&& while you hope for responses I'll make myself D.I.S.S.A.P.E.A.R.
'cause baby you should've been more wise,
when true love is near, it's right in your eyes...
but baby you'll be too late
when you realize I loved you enough
to make my heart restrained again....♥
Author notes
"When you finally wake up, my love will be on the cemetery and without a funeral to be given"-XXVampireeyesXX
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A contest entry
- Another Dirty-Pretty Contest. ♥ by innocence jaded.xx.
475 points, ended September 6, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - You love him. He loves her. by desiredpain.
525 points, ended September 4, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love Me Like You Did Yesterday by Turning-To-Dust.
900 points, ended October 9, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Don't Mind Me [[I'm Only Dying]] --- Dirty Pretty Contest by EvenStarsBreak--x.
600 points, ended October 26, 2008, 67 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Never Again Will This Hurt Me
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Nice use of the dirty pretty form. =] Beautifully written, well done. Thank you for your entry and good luck.
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I really loved the dirty pretty! Reminds me of my earlier writes except a lot better. Such beauty in the poem and i felt what you were talking about. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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I LOVE IT
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nicely done.
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Hmmm..there is a lot to this poem. Once again your dirty prettys are fucking brilliant! I love the emphasis you placed on the key words. perfect . I don't approve of locking up your heart because the time will come and I do not want you to miss out, but *caution* is the key sis...
Oh yes, he will be back, when he finds that blondie he will realize what a shell of soul she is compared to your dephles(lol is that a word?) one. I admire you for this. For placing out your heart on here and for being able to just rant. I love it. Keep at it baby cause it will get better, I promise you that!
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i love this poem its amazingg + fulll of emotion greattt write!
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Well, dearest ! I must say I absolutely loved this poem. It's so full of different emotions, & you just put me in awe with every line. You wrote it so beautifully and it was so easy to relate. Hah, I especially related to this:
-&& I hate to declare war under lines,
just as much as I hate to write about you in hard times
I s.w.o.r.e. myself once I would never write about guys,
and yet here I am feeding myself with empty lies.
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Flawlessly written, as I seem to find myself writing about the same guy over & over again. Beautifully worded, love
- At least here I rant knowing you will never read,
even better knowing you will never understand;
your intelligence is in lack-mode babe [*winks*]
&& I'm no barbie girl, going to a party with ken,
baby you ain't even the p.e.r.f.e.c.t. ten,
[my imaginary guy is]
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Other favorite stanza. I loved the first two lines, because I know exactly how that is, hah, & the whole barbie & ken comparison. Loveddd it ! Thanks for entering & good luck ! ♥
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ahh dirty pretty it hurts me eyes! hehe nah i just not a fan of it! but i do like the meaning in this poem its like "hah fuck you you wouldnt have me so when you come back hurt and cold ill turn you away" hehe
love you!!
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wow this is beautiful....
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Nice job. I think you expressed yourself very well.
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