Crystaline, I feel myself
Enveloped by lights so blinding and bright
As if to extend a hand
Would leave behind a waterfall of luminescence
And I'm a silver liquid in this sea of song
I could live forever or three minutes long
Every pulse of the system sends me downstream
Like a fiber-optic cable running on energy
I'll take my hand back and close my eyes
To sleep...
Author notes
completely free verse, done while listening to choice [f] 
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A contest entry
- Cities in a Gold Dust Of Inspiration (Options, and i allow PW) by sleepingINblackRain.
390 points, ended September 6, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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beautiful, amazing imagry, i can feel that song being the inspiration
Also the was the words are layed out it seems like there is multiple meanings, like "Enveloped by lights so blinding and bright
As if to extend a hand"
Sounds like the fame that the music can bring, and the rest of the poem seems to be telling the tale of how the music, while so pure takes you down
Excellent write thanks for entering
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