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why???

breathing stops
heart's beating out of chest
can't deal with these mistakes

can't deal with what you said

 

why am I doing this to myself?

I thought it would be OK

but those words...

oh how they burn

how they kill me from the inside out

 

I can't do this to myself again

I can't listen to what you have to say

It's killing me slowly and painfully

I just can't

 

insanity rushing back

falling apart again

just by your simple words

it's time to move on for me

I have to go

I can't talk to you anymore

I can't do this

I JUST CAN'T!!!!!!!!!

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  • sunflowers21573
    November 22, 2008

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    Hey this is goood. Such heartfelt emotions all rushing out at once, such rushing flowing emotions. I like it. Good job


    • exithere
      November 22, 2008
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      thnx ^_^ it was a rough summerf so i wrote alot of good stuff this summer FULL of emotion. lol