How many times,
I have wanted to
wipe this tear drop,
yet...
everyday it falls
without fail.
The streaks it leaves
down my face,
remind me of a
time I cherish,
yet...
it is the reason
that this tear drop
falls too.
Ripping the heart out
of me,
the pain tearing through
I pretend that nothing is
wrong,
yet...
this tear drop falls.
As I try to wipe it away,
another one takes its place.
Continuing to fall,
each tear drop,
brings me one day
closer
to a time
that I will once again
cherish...
Author notes
Ask me no questions, I'll tell you no lies...
Please tell me what you think
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Heartfelt Emotions
Past leaves us behind
Present seeks from past
Future we behold so dear
Hoping for the return of the past
With prayers written in tears
Wishes unfold to cherish
the moments once lost
Another great write... take care... go to run
read some more of your poems... I'm having so much fun... love Minoo 
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Amazing!
This poem has a lot of meaning and emotion. I love it!
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i know this all too well,
Great write=]
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Excellent
Such great emotions you have expressed. So very well done. Thank you for sharing such a touching creation.
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Precious~
Oh My Apple Pie~ this is a Beauty of a piece and what words You have brought forth~
The last three lines- tugs also grabs at the Heart
Woot! Woot!
Teardrops have a way of cleansing~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Good write. It's okay to cry. Crying could be our medicine, too.
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In your notes: I don't have to ask questions. I know what this is about and I understand.
Love,
Amera♥
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"continuing" has no e after the u, I think, although that may just be regional orthographical differences. I love this poem, though! Feels like I've been busy far too long, I almost forgot how amazingly talented you are! It's such a sad poem, and I can feel your pain in it. I hope you're feeling better!
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lovely
there was so much pain throughout the poem but in the end it was suddenly gone... To be honest i was a bit disappointed with the last stanza... this is my personal openion... you may very well ignore it, dont feel offended... but i .. kinda wanted the poem to end on a sad note...
Great work dear.. Reading your work after a long time.. Happy to read it..
keep writing
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Thanks Nirmal. the last stanza,
Continueing to fall,
each tear drop,
brings me one day
closer
to a time
that I will once again
cherish...
if you read those two together, you will see that it still is a bit sad,
I am waiting for that tear drop to be wiped away "one day" i wait and I wait...
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Aww How sad. One day your tears will all be wiped away forever. (You know what I mean)
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