So many faces,
All belonging to voices;
I hear none of them.
Does it flow well? Could you feel the emotion?
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Wow. I had to read it like 3 times. It was that good!! It flows very nicely. Have you read Twilight? If you have you know Edward? This kind of reminds me of his talent. He can hear their minds. But then... I don't know. That's just what it reminded me of. Maybe I'm crazy. o.O
All I know this could be about a deaf person expressing their feelings. It's very well written.
Good job C:
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you know i have been there once before and it is kind of creepy, keep it flowing i like this poem short yet strong.
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Oooh I love this! It's very intense and has wonderful imagery. It sorta reminds me of insanity... like there's tons of people trying to talk sense into you, but you can't listen to them even though you want to. Question, though... what form is Senryu? It fits the form of Haiku... are they the same?
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As far as form goes, Senryu and Haiku are the same; however, the subjects that each form covers are different. Haikus focus more on nature and such, whereas Senryus focus on social areas.
That's what I've been told, anyways. Apparently people go nuts if you label your Haikus/Senryus properly. 
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Oh. Ha I guess I've written lots of Senryus before then... I've never been able to write a really good nature poem, but I've got plenty of social ones!
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Wow
I've never read anything like this.
It's kind of confusing to me, but it makes sense at the same time.
I like it :]]
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