Your luminous sails drifted by me in a moment
that became a turning point of my destiny.
You discovered me and my nubile, wandering mind: jumping into
the core of my existence - changing me forever.
How I long to slip into unconsciousness,
to give him the other kiss that he so longed for.
Your oars are lengthy and smooth, caressing the waves,
feeding the hunger of my soul.
You dock yourself brazenly in the harbors of my dreams.
The call of slumber cradling me in the flow of the
waves upon the darkened ocean's night.
Lulling me, lovingly.
Lulling me, loving me.
Another kiss,
another kiss.
Another bewildering glimpse of the elusive, maddening, enveloping sensation that swarms through the heat ravaging my skin. Stealing my thoughts, feelings and senses before they take flight.
Oh tell me where your freedom lies.
For my freedom lies within you.
I step aboard your transparent vessel to
embark upon your infinite journey.
Full of joyous wonder of where your
passage will lead.
Author notes
Option 1 C The
crystal Ship A poem for one of my favorite Doors songs.
Viva El Barco Cristal/The Crystal Ship!
- End of the Night group list • next in list
A contest entry
- The Doors by word20dragon.
750 points, ended August 25, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn that silver into GOLD pt 7 by whispernthedark.
400 points, ended September 20, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
Great write, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.
♥
whisper
-
This is elegant,beautiful,extremely literate and well done.I bow to you...
Adding your comment:
