I close my eyes
shut the world out
everyone will see
there is nobody here
never was a me.
Please tell me what you think
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I sure hope that is not true
I won't see there never was a you I'll always see there is a you and has been a you for me to see
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Boy can I relate to this! I wish this really would work when I closed my eyes. Closing out my thoughts would be great too! Hang in there, the sun is rising for you
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A wonderful thought but a failed philosophy
Still, a beautifully succinct capture of our individual invisibility.... Well done.
Ken
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Strong write, conveying the loneliness one can feel in a crowd, and the ache to know that our presence is noted and valued by others. Or also, that we can live our lives so long by others' terms and priorities that we may discover that we have not been true to the talents, inspirations and inclinations of our own hearts and dreams. In which case reflection, even when painful, may help us see the paths we need to journey.
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Excellent
Such a very touching creation. So very well expressed. Thank you so much for sharing.
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sad
to the point, very sad been there and it hurts to much to stay very well written sometimes the best writing are the best written! keep writing
Rend
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very heartwrenching Mook, the underworld of depression that I know too well. A brilliantly painful expression of angst. Well done.
Rory
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Ouch! very deep and dark emotions here Mook.I may be wrong in the way I am reading this, but it sounds like you have lost 'yourself'. Very little writen here,but your words speak in great volumes! If only we could ... 'shut the world out' with closed eyes.How I know those feelings so well!
I send to you sweet soul, many beautiful blessings of love, peace and happiness.
Your AP friend,
~Angel-anne~
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