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wishing

falling in love again i never thought would happen
looking at you i am glad that i have you to hold my heart
feeling warm around you and cold without your touch
feeling a light in my heart when you are around

knowing in my heart that i want to stay with you
without the memories i would be able to go with my heart
wishing to be rid of these memories
wanting to stay with you forever as i run from my memories

waiting till my memories die so that i can stay with you
wishing for them to be taken so that i can show you are mine

wishing that you will always be mine.

Author notes

this is a poem that i wrote for a guy that i love and want to be with.

what do you think of it i think i maybe should change it

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  • Darc Soul 69
    November 4, 2008
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    I can't believe that no one has commented on this piece yet as they should have done. This is a very interesting piece. It's filled with lots of love for the guy that you have fell in love with and he is one lucky guy to have you in his life. Thanks for sharing and I am going to read more of your work.


    • Jasmine Minx
      November 4, 2008
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      thank you for the comment and i have been writing more. im working on weaving a blanket. i have been making scratch art and i am gonna work on engraving something..yea i am getting more calm and i dnt need the pills anymore really.

      • Darc Soul 69
        November 4, 2008
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        your welcome and thats great that you are getting more and more calm and that you don't need the pills anymore just dont get stressed durning Thanksgiving Break.