I'll judge you too
You call me a reject?
I'll call you duplicates
The two-legged animals
Couldn't sustain
without those with four
Does the current of the waves
change the reigning beauty
of a waterfall?
Haven't you heard..?
Normal is an illusion
Author notes
Your child is absolutely beautiful, no condition or amount of people who think otherwise can change that. Best of luck in everything!
A contest entry
- Contest PIF........... by jcat.
1750 points, ended August 22, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think!
Comments
-
I like this very aggressive voice this poem has.
good points and you kept it short and to the point.

-
Does the current of the waves
change the reigning beauty
of a waterfall?
what a lovely poem you have here!
Normal is not only an illusion, it's also others' way to make us feel like crazy..congratulation on the HW
-
Normal is an illusion......Yes it is!!! Your words put the fighting spirit back into my heart. Thank you...


-
amen






