It is similiar to to a grasshopper,
cricket or secada but it is not a bug
the little green body does flicker
the sharp point is a beek.
the motion is so fast, The tail is a blur.
It is a blink in my eye
as for a minute I get a quick peek
the hummingbird goes back to the sky.
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Great
I love humming birds. Well written.
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Very good!
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I love them in my garden. So quick to move and you only always barely catch them.
~Pamela 
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