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Beary Love

I am a little shabby
With a nose crooked as a hose
Sometimes getting so crabby
Hoping not to be disposed.

They call me Tippicanoe
Feeling ever so blue
Just wanting a straight nose
Oh that would me glow.

Wanting to bring you love
Making you smile would do
Taking away all your blues
Lets make life anew.

Bring out the glue
Slowly turning my nose
Before I get ready to achoo
Oh Oh there I froze.

Now with a nose of honor
Pug as it can be
No longer feeling like a goner
Its only off two degrees.

Feeling your laughter as you hold me
Squeezing me so tenderly
A pucker on the cheek
You yell out Tippicanoe you are unique.















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  • Rose Angel gold member
    August 22, 2008

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    Ah! Dear Teddy Bear...How you have the insight into dear Teddy Bears plight about needing his nose surgery! You are very gifted and this is a very moving write dear friend...A bookmark for this one!


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    August 19, 2008

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    That was wonderful !

    i don't know if I could have done this...be a sweet
    teddy bear and you did it very well!
    Realistic and touching...tickling our souls!
    ears/Seattle well done! well done!


  • ourgirlFriday
    August 16, 2008

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    Well done indeed!

    Fantastic piece! I was hoping that someone would single out Tippicanoe, by himself at least! Lovely, darling write! Thank you for entering!