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After All

After all the wasted years
After all is said and done
all the painful tears
all the harmless fun
After all the lonely nights
After all that we've been through
all the stupid fights
always it's been you
After all the wasted years
After countless memories
all the painful tears
all in all my soul is free
After all the lonely nights
After all you have the key
always had the right
always cared for me?
After all the wasted years
After all you said is true?
all I've known to do
all I gave into
After all the lonely nights
After all your holds still tight
all gone but not forgotten
always loving you.

Author notes

wrote this awhile ago but tweaked it. It used to be all "after all's" but it was tooo repeative even thought it still is. Not sure how I feel about it yet.
Written January 15th, 2004

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  • Guardian
    April 4, 2004
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    repetition isn't always a bad thing, this had a wonderful message and sounded very nice. Take care, cheers!