On a clear night,
I stare up at the dark sky in wonder.
I think about how all those
huge and glowing stars
can make room for each other in one galaxy...
And I think about how peaceful
the sky really seems.
Because it can't be.
There are black holes,
and stars exploding,
and asteroids raging.
Yet, on this clear night,
everything is as tranquil as can be.
Author notes
This is on prompt 1, the picture.
A contest entry
- PIF Merci! by GreenHrtPaleMoon.
1000 points, ended September 3, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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An interesting take and a job well done. I wish you best of luck with this!
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good job!!!!!
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This is a really good poem...nothing is as it seems...
And I think about how peaceful
the sky really seems.
Because it can't be.
There are black holes,
and stars exploding,
and asteroids raging.
Thats my fav bit...the rhythm and rhyme is great...Fantastic write!
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