artist unknown, taken from Google
The Moon over Gemini blinks
when ghost owl wings stir clouded skies,
painting the night in Indian inks
as Summer hides in cool disguise.
When ghost owl wings stir clouded skies,
the Mountain stands with bated breath
as Summer hides in cool disguise
it waits upon the Springtime’s death.
The Mountain stands with bated breath,
the Valley chokes in pre-dawn mist.
It waits upon the Springtime’s death
as blooms lay damp where dew has kissed.
The Valley chokes in pre-dawn mist,
painting the night in Indian inks
as blooms lay damp where dew has kissed
and the Moon over Gemini
blinks.
While this is obviously about the changing of seasons, it is also a very personal write about living with someone with bipolar disorder. This is about a troubled relationship I once had. The moon over Gemini represents both her and I, as we were both Gemini...a very fitting sign for someone who is bipolar. The ghost owl is alcohol. Spring and summer represent her manic and depressed states. I was the mountain. The valley was her crashing to depths of depression. The blooms were our four daughters (two each from previous marriages).
As with all my poetry, I appreciate constructive feedback so that I can improve as a writer. Please give it to me straight, I'm a big boy, I can take it.
Written in pantoum form