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Minty-Fresh

Use your words
but understand
they have no meaning
peace
those two fingers define you

make yourself heard
let them know what you think
never been afraid of being blunt
but look for support
and its agreed
your the best

hold tough
hold strong
so you can go 'round
making the world minty-fresh
one stick of gum at a time

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  • Spiritual Soul silver member
    August 17, 2008

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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    Wow this was so cute! I loved this, it was so "fresh" and original. This was very creative and hopeful, awesome write, Keep it up and Good luck to you!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~
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  • kel dog
    August 16, 2008
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    this is a good one.


  • written-in-ink
    August 16, 2008

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    you have no idea how much i love this!!!


    gah
    me too the 'T'



    "peace
    those two fingers define you"

    loved that

    "making the world minty-fresh
    one stick of gum at a time "


    gah that was amazing!!!