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Our society

I can`t give a shit about society
Rules for this and dont`s for that
The whole business stinks
can only benefit the slicks
that turn their nose high  above all
like no one exists or roll, the rock and roll
and roll the rock

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A rock sonnet my style
Either you like it or you hate it
Makes no difference to me.

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  • Joseph Hollis
    December 16, 2008
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    Yessir, I like this one. That first line pretty much sums it all up. Well done.


  • Jalalbad gold member
    August 20, 2008
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    mad dog, mad dog