I see you as a leaf in winter;
Colorless. Lifeless. Useless and out of place.
I see you as a bed of snow during summer;
Unwanted. Hated and stepped on with disdain.
I see you as a raining day during summer;
Annoying. Unpleasant and Infuriating.
I see you as bump in the middle of a smooth road;
Obstructing. I can’t avoid you and that makes me livid.
I see you as a bad case of acne;
Disgusting. You make beauty seem ugly.
I see you as a nightmare;
You are a plague to me and for that I hate you.
I see you as a rash;
I detest your existence.
I see you as a sewer;
You spread so much shit and it
Still comes back to you again.
I see you as a sad excuse for a boy;
You are a disgrace, don’t you see that?
I see you as the definition of Stupidity;
You live in excessive denial.
Break down your walls of Inanity
And see how much you have been rejected by society.
By me and By the world.
A contest entry
- Dazzle me by notorious.
864 points, ended August 23, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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Wow...
Interesting take on the prompt "you're not", by showing all the things he actually is.
I love some of your hilarious and cynical remarks - they are quite original and vivid.
Definitely an effective write. You get your point across and I think he'd shrink, mouse-like, into his clothes if he read this.
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thank you!
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Too many capitalizations...
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