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I don't feel like writting poetry

I don't feel like writting poetry
i feel like laughing loud
i want to run outside and scream
and drop my pencil down.

I feel like having fun
and playing in the rain
i just need the sun
to come out once again.

I would love some happiness
to come my way
and to hear three words
that you would say.

I didn't want to write a poem
but here we are
all i wanted was happiness
but instead i have scars.

A contest entry

Gotta love writting poems when your bored at school.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    August 19, 2008

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    Ye wrote a poem here
    that speaks beyond the tears
    One that has open up
    and now drinks from sweet cup.

    To write when one does not want to
    and show this much talent
    should not be wasted
    without something to do


    Sorry my rhyme is off today

    Riftkin