haiku homily – non-entry
3/6/3 Nr.4
best haiku
very like seppuku
short and sharp
5/7/5 Nr.5
concentrated thought
fewest syllables conceived
makes perfect haiku
2/4/2 No.6
I come
beans for dinner
goodbye
hu-san, august 17th. 2008.
Author notes
I dedicate Nos. 5 and 6 to my Haiku Queen daughter, Mariza and my Haiku Princess daughter, Aziram (Gaze) with love.
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A contest entry
- FOR MEMBERS of HUGH WYLES FAVOURITES GROUP ONLY by hugh wyles.
1750 points, ended September 4, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Dear Hu-san,
Enjoyed your succinct haiku's!
Sayonara!
Love and Hugs,
Mo-san
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Oh, I haven't seen this before, but with so many entries we got, it's easy to get lost.
You don't come after eating beans, no no no
Those are amusing, last one does smell a little though.
family dinner
cooked beans
and dessert for one
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I come
beans for dinner
goodbye
I like beans...especially with raisin brown bread, yum! Just stay upwind of me for a day or two after.
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Three great haiku's dear Hugh.
I've really enjoyed this contest and the great entries that are in it.
have beans
no have dinner
with you
The picture is fantastic even though it is sad that they took their own lives.
Love Bea
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Truths!
"Brevity is the soul of wit..."
Smiles
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Fun!
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