undecided decisions
unforced forces
unmotivated motivation
sanded mind fading
washing my soul away
watching from afar...
as the angel and devil
shake hands
corrupted sweetheart
Author notes
Option 2: Title
Everyone can have a different interpretation of this...but the way I saw it was pretty much sometimes...things change...things go from good to bad...love changes. Something that is so dear...can be so confused within and causes more confusion outside...could be the sweetest of hearts...but their corrupted by something thats uncontrollable. And then...you have nothing you can do...but watch it spread around you...
A contest entry
- Option Time (Yay!) by City-of-Angels.
400 points, ended August 31, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
-
Ohhh hey now! This is like
I'm a fan of abstract poems like this. One of the things I like about your write is:
"undecided decisions
unforced forces
unmotivated motivation"
Made the reader think a lot about things. You took this in a really creative way, Thanks so much for entering good luck!
-
this is very abstract...so much so that it's hard to comment on. your AN makes it clearer though...could be the sweetest of hearts...but their corrupted by something thats uncontrollable...corruption sounds like such a serious word...such a...horrible word i guess.
i like the idea of it, good use of the title great job!
Adding your comment:
