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Which?


Should I stay or should I go, is it worth my while
enter in commit the sin feel your viscious smile,
put this life into your hands only for a day,
gamble all give in to fate, let you have your way?

Is this wrong or is this right, will the guilt return
times before you slamned the door, would I ever learn?
Tried to trust to instinct but my heart betrayed my love
nearer to the door are you, at my back you shove.

Will I win or will I lose, do I really care?
Knowing from experience you never have played fair,
smugness shows from head to toe, victor now you are
stuck to you like tar to shoe now I've gone too far.

Am I drowning in this mire while you take me down
or just drifting on the edge as you grab your crown?









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  • Dalaney gold member
    August 20, 2008
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  • darrylblacksr
    August 19, 2008

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    What thought provoking poem, and I definitely wish you the best in the contest. Thanks for sharing this with me...

  • Bob Fox
    August 16, 2008

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    Does make one wonder if the romp is worth it in the end. Hell, it seems that many take the chance. I wonder, in the end is it worth it. Words to ponder poet.