Drops of rain
Scrolls on face
Stories of pain
With such grace
In love of dears
With a silent pray
Trickle without fears
Speak all can't say
Giggles of heart
Betrayals of light
Moans when depart
Show all that's right
All lovely an' nice
Screams an' groan
When you've it all
And when all alone
They're so brave
An' to me so dear
Their faces grave
Oh my sparkle, sweet tear
In a list
What do you think of it?
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Very good job on this poem. I do love how you relayed your feeling in this poem. You are very good poet.
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mmm strange poem, but i like!! love your use of words welldone ..
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This seems so bittersweet, and I love the rhyming. The wording's a bit odd in places, but that adds to it. Well done!
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I like the rhyming in this poem. It's short, but cuts deep. Nicely done.
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Thanks for the comment and for reading my poetry!
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Thanks for the comment and for reading by poetry!
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This is a great poem. Its a little to read. Its still good though. Lol i love the last line!!! "oh my sparkle" nice lol ;]
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this is great ! =)
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lovely peace of poetry nicely writen alil hard to read but lovely
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Dark red on black is hard for me to read.
This speaks to me about the people who make life worthwhile, friends and family who share all the good times and bad ones. There are "stories of pain" for all of us, and also "Giggles of heart".
Short lines are very hard to write in rhyme, and you have done well to show the sense within it.
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Outstanding
I loved the why it rhymed it has a good flow its a beautiful poem.
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sweet tears yes indeed
forever flow
Roses to you
Teresa
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