It's rough losing black people like this
Especaily the black man who gave comedy a twist
A king of comedy infact flipping the script
As the first on stage saying "ya soma ma bitch"
The way great blacks are going shall concern me
Plus I know baby girl is gone miss uncle Bernie
This is a man that will be mentioned a lot
Slapping people dead in the face for Chris Rock
He proved the strength of a black can not be stopped
I wonder wow what would he do for Barock
He played a great roll in guese who eyes were locked
When they told me Bernie mac died and I was in shoick
Now I'm mad Bernie was the one to make you laugh
Talking to america like a stress out tv dad
The way great blacks fall is full of crap
Let give a moment of silence for Bernie Mac
A contest entry
- Bernie Mac i Ain't Scared of You Mutha F***kaz by theredcatjazzoflove.
600 points, ended August 28, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
-
Good tribute.
I loved Bernie Mac.
May he rest in peace.
Peace,
Lowell Poe. -
Not a bad write, not bad at all. I saw a few spelling mistakes in this piece but I am unsure of your intent so I'm hesitant to critisize.
One thing I must say is that we Canadians pray that Barack will not fall, come on with it baby, and stand tall. It's your time now. The little people have spoken. Good luck to you, and your countrymen.
Johnny
-
I can totaly agree hon totally you really did a very great job and brought up some great fax with this
good luck boy
Adding your comment:
