Stuff piles up eventually
in places
meant for other stuff
blocking efficient achievement
and usage of space.
Castor Oil used to be taken in the spring
and there are herbal teas.
The Container Store might have something
for people like you.
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Nice
It's a very nice poem. I don't exactly understand everything, but maybe I'm just a little dense... lol... Anyway, even though I don't understand everything about the poem, I get the main points and I like it, so props! Keep it up! -
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I had some of my obsessive compulsive friends in mind. Sometimes you just write without going into things too deeply.
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Whoa!
You've run through three related topics here...I wasn't expecting verse two to be what it was. Still, I like it. The subtleness of that middle verse intrigues me...
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hahahaha
this is humorous.
and I can relate all to well to the first portion- so I suppose the ending might also be something directed at me
Maybe I ought to head out to the "container store" although I've not run across one yet.
I appreciate your style in this poem. I like how you use short amount of space- the point is very hard to miss with such abrupt phrases.
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