The hairs upon my neck all start to rise,
My pulses race, yet I begin to smile.
I felt the presence of amazing eyes
And know that we'll be greeting in a while.
I catch a scent that means so much to me
And hear a voice that almost stops the clock.
Your hold me in your arms to set me free,
A single kiss to open up the lock.
Alone at last with skin beneath my lips,
Your hands and mine are busily employed.
Releasing all the buttons, hooks and zips
Until two naked bodies are enjoyed.
Each part of you responds to fond caress,
You trigger my release by screaming YES!!!
Author notes
I live at number three
In a list
A contest entry
- Decisions Decisions by Dalaney.
1150 points, ended August 20, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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YES !!!
Yummy stuff...gives me sensual chills....you continue to amaze me -
My mind was slipping Freuds all over this one.
Good one.
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Well im pretty sure
this piece will rate high
since we see
the contest holder
and she loves to play
good luck but sure it isnt needed
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Track down the errant virgule and eliminate it - or give it some playfellows, bro.
I guess you had to write this to balance out the other poem - the one about snoring - or was it the other way round? Either way, you were on a bit of a poetic feeding-frenzy yesterday, and I worry about you.
The poem? It's a straight-up-and-down, no-nonsense, Greenian sonnet about sex. It gets bunnies, no probs.
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Oh, this is a right randy piece this is, well done Jeff and all the best!
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Yikes!
Another one that's so adult you don't need the warning.
Hot stuff.
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