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I Miss You

This distance ever looming
This distance ever looming
Over my head cos you are not here
But even though I'm alone
I know that on return
I'll have you there to block the shadows out

Oceans pull us apart
But we're still going
Over the many miles, yeah
We're still going
And even in the dark, I know
We're still going strong

Nice planet but it's so big
Nice planet but it's so much
Bigger when you're not here with me
But even though I'm alone
I know that on return
I'll have your arms wrapped round me happily

The tides pull us apart
But we're still going
Over the water barrier
We're still going
And lonely in the dark, I know
We're still going strong

Author notes

Goes to the tune of "After Hours" by We Are Scientists

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  • lildarkemogirl
    August 16, 2008
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    i like it .. its very emotional ...


  • Marcus.
    August 16, 2008

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    almost lyrical quality to it. it almost sounds like a soldier in Iraq is singing about his wife back in the states. good job. nice imagery. two thumbs up.