I am the light
glistening silently
in evergreen dew drops,
dancing in whispers
of perpetual dreams
In a list
A contest entry
- Saturday Quickie by Riamh.
450 points, ended August 22, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I got to say, I could see this as dialogue in an Anime; like, the main character knows his teacher is actually his enemy, and to taunt him, he sits calmly at his desk and when asked, "You, in the back, who are you?" Bam! His face becomes curiously shadowed, and his voice becomes like a whisper, but just loud enough to really stab at his enemy's attention, "I am the light, glistening silently..." Hope me saying so is alright; you did a good job, evidenced simply by it inspiring that scene there.
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short but feelings swirl. i liked it. good piece.
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a powerful write with beautiful imagery.
nevadapoet -
I really am amazed at the wonderful depth that you compose in your short verses. You have a unique and wonderful poetic voice.
Love,
Amera♥
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Nice prompt!
I like fantasy writes! Yours does well in capturing the essence of the picture.
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OH my, such a beautiful metaphor for the word "enchantment". YOur imagery is light and beautiful. Few words, all powerful. I will have to read more of your verses. So glad I joined this group, to be able to enjoy the talents of so many! Now I have a new favorite!
Namaste!
Linda
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And again...nicley done...Powerful, short and sweet. Congrats on the honorable mention trophy.
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I do love this,Graham,and I can see why you got an honorable..Words just full of wonder, imagery and fascinating thoughts as one reads the few words..They enhance the picture so vividly! Bravo!
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This was really soft and yet beautifully crafted.. You painted such a soft picture here.. Niaish for sharing this wonderful poem!
Angel
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Beautiful write. I especially like the dancing in whispers of perpetual dreams. Good job. Katie Lazette
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Extremely expressive and descriptive. Beautiful!
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woooow
such words leaving me touched deep inside! this short but very effective...such a sweeetpoem my friend...i admire your writing
julit
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wow! it's like a magic wand enthralled me...speechless...
this is the effect of your words.
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Stunning, absolutely stunning. You have packed so much feeling and emotion into so few words and the picture is so so lovely, but then I am a very old elf and these are my family
Beautiful. Val
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Simple and truly beautiful!!!
Your words are so lovely! The imagery is outstanding my friend! An absolute pleasure to read thsi wondreful gem! It has a spiritual essence about it and wraps me in the very fiber of every word! BRAVO!!!! HUgs, Grace
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BREATH TAKING
soft as dew,dancing whispers,perpetual dreams...the light and magic flows wonderful sweet from your golden pen sighs... a beautiful read my friend
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well done, you have woven what should be a winner, great job, John
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Superb
Ah, 'tis a fine write, methinks. Completely worthy of the "wee people". Indeed, it captures the essence of the photo. Again, well done.
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Beautiful.
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Such a soft, beautiful visual. Wonderful!! best of luck to you.
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whisper
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Wonderful
So much said in so few words.Well done,
Ros
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That's beautiful! short, but very sweet. Best of luck!
Slayer
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