Yes! you're so late!
She died years ago
But she used to breath
And she no more does so
Why returned so late?
She waited for too long
Why left her all alone?
U knew she wasn't that strong
Her eyes always had tears
In her life, when was dead
Pain trickled, face shouted
The words lips never said
Even in her last moments
Her soul told her love's true
Last words she said were oh!
I love you! I love you!
Author notes
I often don't write such poetry and that's my first. Dunno why and how I wrote it!
What do you think of it?
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hey sister too much nice piece of poetry..really i liked every word of it.
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this is a painful but great writing
reminding us that life is way too short
and things need to be said before its too late
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thanx anya! and yes things left unsaid
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And thanks for the comment ^.^
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Good write I like the lines;
"Pain trickled, face shouted
The words lips never said"
Line four was a little strange to read,
but it worked out. Overall I thought it was pretty and a good write!
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this piece has a tickle to the words in sweet rhythm like a sonnet
Her eyes always had tears
In her life, when was dead
Pain trickled, face shouted
The words lips never said
i just love that stanza and the way the poem overrides pain with love.
WTG!
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