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Our love

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A book without an end

 is our love

Penned in the colors

 of the rainbow

Promishing hope

 Love, faith

A poem we gave each other

as a token,

to cherish our love

I will never forget

that poem my love

We`ll always read it together

Holding hands

Looking deep

into each others eyes

Reminding us, how lucky

we have been

To love each other

in such a special way

I love you

And that is,

the simple truth

My love.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Jasmine 1
    September 27, 2008

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    A very beautiful book to write...'Endless love'.
    Lucky destiny, living a life together loving each other, forever...
    Nice poem.
    Greetings,
    Gioia


  • Moonlightdragon gold member
    September 22, 2008
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    Your written voice rings clear

    with a touching vision of love.
    Best of luck in the contest.
    Blessed be
    Robert


  • Jalalbad gold member
    September 18, 2008
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    I thought you deleted me Nick, well now you have them remembering all the good times. How sweet and I thought you were a loner


  • Pixi
    September 16, 2008
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    did i forget 2 give u an applause????? bad me

  • Pixi
    September 16, 2008
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    sweet, and lovely

    this is so sweet
    it makes me smile... reminds me of all the good times..


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    August 17, 2008

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    eterrnity and the beauty you wrapped in your words bringing depth to the prompt..and my thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece..well done...


  • Remnant
    August 16, 2008

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    I am sure your book will sell well some day
    Keep on writing

  • Jalalbad gold member
    August 16, 2008

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