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Rapunzel of the mordern times

Each casing second burns to come
As each black petal reminds the wait
Still waiting for my knight
To free me from this deceiving heights
Before it consumes me in

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This is the very last one for me for...who knows...lol

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  • crimsondew
    November 3, 2008
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    Imagery beautifully portrayed here...


  • Yorkshire Lass
    October 2, 2008
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    an amazing poem


  • mysticstorm gold member
    August 17, 2008

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    May he arrive in time...touching and words felt so deep...how many of us have wait for that one moment to come and not pass us by...
    thank you for entering!


  • XxunBeautifulxX
    August 16, 2008
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    This is very good very good indeed