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Exhale....

Exhale troubled soul,
unlock bated breath;
thoughts imprisoned
like a heart in bony cell;

Free thyself, lest you die;
wait not for perfumed air
to mix with, create a shade,
to match lilac or rose;

You have not the power
but you are able
to turn winter silver
today.

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  • Cup-a-Joe
    August 17, 2008
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    thoughts imprisoned
    like a heart in bony cell,
    I love that.
    Joe

  • goalsv
    August 17, 2008
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    Excellent take on the prompt, I love the imagery you show here, it makes it such a smooth read.