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moon beams

broken
split and shattered
cracked pieces
days worn leftovers
come night
the moon caresses
smoother's scares
nurtures with care
cloaks under darkness
protected in her sheltered beam
embraces without judgement
she holds no ill will
like a child of her womb
she blankets with veils

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  • JinSays gold member
    August 18, 2008

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    protected in her sheltered beam
    embraces without judgement

    waht a lovely little write this is!
    I loved it all the way through, thank you for entering,
    jin

  • carole21
    August 16, 2008

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    a very nice write . . liked "cloaks under darkness" and "like a child of her womb" . . good luck in the contest