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Letters of Moonshine

Dear Moon

Who guides lovers and romance by pale-lantern light
And crosses their paths; morever than the sun  
Shine brightly for me tonight.

 

 

Author notes

Ok... I know this is not gonna get anywhere in the competition but I hope it is read and enjoyed... I really couldn't cypher more out of it or my thoughts... Damn

this pic is called 5000 Moons Back, the Artist is Max Ash.

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  • fantasysmurf
    September 23, 2008

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    Confirm the Enjoyment!


    Great short poem. Do not think that because your poem didnt acheive your greatest intents (or the contest holder's) that this was a failure - IT WAS BRILLIANT!


  • movedon
    September 22, 2008

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    You should have gold. Well, if this had been my contest, then I would have given you gold! Short..beautiful..plain amazing. I like how you made it a letter almost, "dear moon" Creative.

    ing alone,
    Mylee


  • ModernXTimes
    September 10, 2008
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    There's nothing more satisfying than a short and sweet poem like this one that pulls off it's purpose so well. It's a simple piece of the longing for love and I loved it deeply. I don't know if you did well in the contest, but if it brought joy to the people who read it that's all that matters right? Keep up the good work!! Great job!!

    Sincerely,
    modernxtimes

  • whatami
    September 6, 2008
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    "You who feeds off sun's light,
    may you be as bright,
    and glorious as day."

    I once wrote a poem about the moon. I don't know where it went. But I think your entire poem was better than the one verse above. Love the ending. Great job, thanks for your cmnt.


  • Ms. Black Eyeliner
    August 31, 2008

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    i like this poem i think its short and sweet and hopefull you had me smiling good job


  • Nephlim
    August 26, 2008

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    I liked how you began it, like you were addressing a letter to the moon itself, interesting . Short and to the point, but wonderful at the same time! =].

    GREAT job
    diggin it majorly


  • JinSays gold member
    August 18, 2008

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    So do I.
    Excellent.
    sometimes we dont need alot of words. This is perfect just like this.
    thank you for taking the time to enter, and best wishes to you,
    jin


  • stephilou
    August 16, 2008
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    Well, I think it's lovely

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